I personally like the one from the first shit with the "BAH" words above it. Well actually I like the pot that's on it, the boat itself is a bit boring. We don't have to explain or justify why we have a vacuum on board of the boat, it's just there and the flies could swarm in it when you are catching flies.
I like the fact though that the player (as seen in the second from the top left row) sticks out of the ride a little bit. I can't pin down why but to the eye it looks right.
As my second choice; the second sheet, the second from the top on the second row ;). It feels alive and we could use the torches to lit the environment in the third act.
By the way, great work again Tom. I personally think you really did a great job on designing the visual style. Not just this boat or the character but the entire style guide. It really all adds up and I think that's what makes a good design.
Well, I'm usually a sucker for symmetry with a twist to break it up... I like the more symmertrical carts on the second sheet, but they could use a little... well... oompf to break them up. Just a little detail here and there.
Sorry for the delay, had to finish some shit.
Hey Tom,
BeantwoordenVerwijderenI personally like the one from the first shit with the "BAH" words above it. Well actually I like the pot that's on it, the boat itself is a bit boring. We don't have to explain or justify why we have a vacuum on board of the boat, it's just there and the flies could swarm in it when you are catching flies.
I like the fact though that the player (as seen in the second from the top left row) sticks out of the ride a little bit. I can't pin down why but to the eye it looks right.
As my second choice; the second sheet, the second from the top on the second row ;). It feels alive and we could use the torches to lit the environment in the third act.
By the way, great work again Tom. I personally think you really did a great job on designing the visual style. Not just this boat or the character but the entire style guide. It really all adds up and I think that's what makes a good design.
Thanks man, doing what I can. Thanks for the quick response, I,'ll see you tomorrow.
BeantwoordenVerwijderenWell, I'm usually a sucker for symmetry with a twist to break it up... I like the more symmertrical carts on the second sheet, but they could use a little... well... oompf to break them up. Just a little detail here and there.
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